Six-Room-Process with Thomas

If you want to know more about six room poems click this http://leesclassroom.global2.vic.edu.au/2017/12/12/six-room-poems-2/

This is Thomas’ Poem:

Lonely,dense,cold

Naked and nothingless

Unthought of

Air blowing, leaves rustling 

Brown and grey

Cold, boresome

Air blowing, leaves rustling

Where did the snow travel from?

Air blowing, leaves rustling.

This is Christian’s Poem:

Moon boom

Im on the moon and it makes big BOOMS!!

It’s very dark

It’s very dark 

It’s very dark

There’s nothing to do

It’s very quiet and nothing to do

It’s very hot in this dumb dumb suit,

and I have no water

But it’s still dark dark dark!!!

By Chrsitian and Thomas

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