April 17

100 Word Challenge (Although they ran quickly, they were still not making enough progress)

Ahhhhhhh, dad, there’s a robber and he took my soccer ball said the little boy Okay son said the dad I will go and chase him. Although he ran quickly, the robber was still not making enough progress. The dad easily catches up and got the ball, but the robber got away. After that, the little boy and the dad had ice-cream together and by then they had noticed that the robber was but then the robber stop and took a costume off and guess what it was a famous soccer player so the little boy got a photo + tips.


Posted April 17, 2018 by christian2017 in category Uncategorized

4 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge (Although they ran quickly, they were still not making enough progress)

  1. sofiama2016

    It needs a few full stops and your background is really busy and distracting but otherwise nice 100 word challenge.
    Sofia-http://sofiama2016.global2.vic.edu.au/2018/04/18/100-word-challenge-although-they-ran-quickly-they-were-still-not-making-enough-progress/

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  2. libby2016

    Good start Christian.
    See if you can edit this piece so that it has the appropriate punctuation (speech marks, full stops, commas).
    Reread the piece aloud and check the last sentence for clarity.

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